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* I like it
* Critique please, good and bad i would prefer a bit of both in each Critique please.

*First try realism *
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:star::star::star::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Impact

A very cute piece indeed! The horse looks adorable and interested, and I see how you got the pupils looking just right! You also did some shading, and it's easy to see each strand of hair in the mane.

On the horse, the eyes seem not to be on the same level. The one in the right side is a little higher up that the other. (I remember always having trouble drawing them at the same level when I drew horses >_&gt<img src="e.deviantart.com/emoticons/w/w…" width="15" height="15" alt=";)" title=";) (Wink)" /> The same with the ears. Both of them are leaning to the right. Maybe if you made some guidelines to keep the face straight? It's not such a big deal though, and it doesn't ruin the cute look on the horses face at all X3 (I just love that little pink spot on it's nose).

Now on the colors, especially when doing sky like that, it's important to do all your pencil strokes the same way. I see some of them are vertical, others are horizontal it makes it a bit confusing for the viewer.

Overall a really cute picture, it definately made me smile :3